4/23/08

English II Honors 4/24 A- 4/25 B SUB work

4/24 A Day English classes- Keep this handout, highlight it, take notes on it, and make it look like you actively read it. This will be a grade. Do not lose this handout. You should constantly refer to the directions throughout the class period.

  1. Mr. Dunlap hands out this blog and students volunteer to read aloud to class, the assignment listed for today assignments
  2. If you didn't finish your test. Mr. Dunlap will pass back your unfinished test for you to finish. If you didn't take your test, you will need to take it. Make sure you record your answers on a separate piece of paper. ALL STUDENTS MUST REMAIN QUIET UNTIL ALL TESTS HAVE BEEN TURNED INTO MR. DUNLAP. DO NOT TALK WHILE STUDENTS ARE TESTING.
  3. If you finish the test before others you should work on any of the following (QUIETLY at your seat)

-Make sure your R#45 (example still on board) has at least 15 entries. Remember the things you record should support your thesis. The more book support you record on R#45, the better your paper will be.

-Go to the table at the front of class, and take your own copy of the Literary Analysis Guide and the two model essays on Literary Analysis (conch paper, Fitzgerald paper). Read the part about support for the Literary Anaysis paper from Topic Sentence to Clincher/Concluding Sentence. Then look at the support in the model essays. Compare the items the guide tells you belong in the support with the model essays.

4. When EVERYONE has turned in their test to Mr. Dunlap, he will handout the following:

-Peer Editing Sheet Introduction

When you get this handout, write your name where it says writer's name.

Before you exchange introductions with someone in the class, make sure you consider the following:

-that their introduction must include the name of the book and author

- it should have a linking sentence before the thesis that connects the thesis to the rest of the introduction

- that you should be honest about whether the person's intro. is engaging. If it isn't and you write that it is, you aren't helping the person.

-the background information should give enough background so that if someone hadn't read the book, they would understand it. It shouldn't throw in book terms or names without explaining who or what they are.

5) Have someone you trust fill out your editing sheet while reading your introduction. You can have more than one person fill it out, just make sure they all put their names.

6)DUE Monday: Support for Essay. See ABOVE regarding reading the Guide/Models for directions and R#45. If you do not have your support on Monday, then you will not have the advantage of someone reviewing it for you.

3/25 - B Day English Classes

  1. Mr. Dunlap to handout this blog. A volunteer will read today's directions. You do not need to read the directions for the A day classes, as you have already completed that lesson.
  2. This is your blog to keep, please write on it, highlight it, take notes on it, or make it look like you have actively read it. I will grade you on this when I return. Keep it.
  3. Mr. Dunlap will handout the following:

-Things Fall Apart- Peer Editing the Body

-Things Fall Apart- Literary Analysis Conclusion

4)If you wrote your support, as was assigned, exchange papers with someone you trust and have them fill out your Peer editing worksheet. If you didn't write your support, then write your support. You can have more than one person edit your support for you. Also, have someone edit your paper for spelling, punctuation, or grammar errors. You might want to read your paper out loud to the person so you catch some of your own mistakes, and also because they may not completely understand what you are trying to write.

5) Next look at the Literary Analysis Guide handout and Model Essays. Read what you are supposed to have in the Conclusion of your Essay. Then read the model essays' conclusions. You can do this by yourself, or you can do it in your group. After reviewing the conclusion, write your conclusion on the paper provided. Due Tuesday if you don't finish in class.

6) When you come to class on Tuesday, you should have the following. An introduction peer editing sheet- filled out in completion for your introduction, plenty of support and the support editing sheet filled out completely by a peer, a conclusion.

4/21/08

Yearbook 4/11-4/22

DVD Project due 4/16-A
4/17-B
Must have all 3 parts- or points will be deducted
must be turned in on time or points will be deducted

CLEAN OUT BOX
All items associated with a spread MUST be cleaned out of box and placed in the correct copy envelope today. This is a grade. Last chance.

3) Bid Project- This is a project that will have many parts. Please pay close attention during instruction of this project, and turn every part in on time Late parts will not be accepted as ample time is given for groups to complete assignment in class.

Part 1) On your OWN, Brainstorm the following 3 categories for things that would have made this year better. Teacher explains in detail.
1)Yearbook Company
2)Photographer
3)YB Staff

Make a chart of all the things that would have made this year better from each. You can use any of the following to help you with your list: (expectations, pricing, equipment needed to produce, equipment needed to teach, workshops and price, quality, performance of yearbook rep, performance of photographer, performance of staff, ways to supplement income, solutions to common yb issues (no sales), senior, uc, personality pictures, quality of products, advertising/posters, software, delivery of product, commission pictures, coverage, etc)

Part 2) Join together with 1 or 2 group members and
1)TAKE your lists and combine them into a separate list/chart. This must be on a new sheet of paper
2)Add to the group list things which you brainstorm as a group
3) Search through current yearbooks' colophons for resources they had which you could potentially add to your group list/chart
4) Make sure there is a minimum of 20 items under each column

TURN IN PART 1 and 2-
PART 1- individual list/chart (each person's)
Part 2- Group list (minimum of 20 items per column)
Turn in all work together in one of your folders
Due Thursday 4/17 B and 4/18 A

PART 3- Lists returned (part 1 and 2)

Take your group list and revised if needed. Now, eliminate any thing listed that isn't realistic or revise it to something more realistic. Research each item in detail ( if applicable). For example, if your group put new computers, you must research what type of computers you will be asking for in detail. The following description was found calling a computer store for the best specifications for a computer for publication and digital image production in 2005.

3 - Pentium 4 computers, 800 FSB Systems or comparable with:3.0 Ghz, 1Gb Ram (minimum), 200 Gb HD, DVD-RW, Windows XP Professional, flat screen 19-inch monitors (minimum)

This means you will have to search the internet, call places, ask experts.

For items that describe quality or expectation from people, be specific about what you expect. Also think about potential problems with the item you are asking for and include solutions. For example:

Photographer
1) The photographer will provide student identification cards for students grades 9th through 12th personalized by student name and student number by September 1st. All IDs must be in the same format as the IDs printed on campus. Examples will be given to accommodate. Photographer will print these pictures from all student pictures taken during senior photography or underclass photography. If a student refused to take a picture or enrolls after pictures, the photographer is not liable to produce an ID for that student.

or STAFF
1) Staff members and their parents will sign a contract stating if they do not meet their deadlines, they will receive a zero on that deadline, which most likely will result in failure of the term, and potential removal from the class. Students and their parents will be expected to abide by their signed agreement.

When finished, you should have 3 categories of well-thought out, researched, and detailed expectations. This must be typed and be reviewed for mistakes or grammatical errors before turning in. Each category must have a minimum of 10 detailed expectations. Extra credit will be given to those groups that have more than 10 per category. Make sure each group member's name is on typed project, and that it has been saved to a secure location so that it can be accessed again.

Part 3 DUE as specified on Monday 4/28 A- Day or 4/29 for groups with B Day students.

Megan, Jordan, Dee- Index project. Pictures of index students and ID pictures must be taken, downloaded, and saved in proper location or inserted into index spread by tomorrow. DVD Project assigned. Due April 29th. Speak to Adrian.

Indexed names must be revised by tomorrow.

Andrew, Nicole, Louvennia
Revise yb application and make it more specific to Terry Parker. Come up with a list of 15 interview questions each (total of 45 questions), which you would think will help route out the students who will not succeed in the yearbook program. Save the revised application in a secure location and print it out as well. Type interview questions.

Part 4 to come

English II Honors 4/11 B-4/22-A

4/11-B -4/14-A

NWEA testing reading finished-B
A- see 4/7-4/8 entry and J#43

4/15B-4/16A
J#44
Write the theme you've chosen in your journal, then write your thesis. Read your theme and thesis out loud to your group. Get their opinion on whether its effective. Change if needed.

Workbook pages assigned during NWEA checked 177, 184, 185 as well as R#45

Thesis statements checked and approved by Ms. Batten.

Study Guide TFA distributed. Students to go through and answer questions together.

Test 4/21 B
4/22 A
EA 2, Unit 3 Assigned- Due in completion on 5/1-B 5/2-A
Must contain all of the following parts
1)Brainstorm of theme
2)Intro/Peer Review of Intro
3)R#45 in detail
4)Supporting paragraphs/Peer review of those paragraphs
5)Conclusion/Peer review of conclusion
6)Revised Final Draft typed-double spaced with parenthetical documentation

4/17 B- 4/18 A

J#45
Based on what you've learned this year about introductions, attempt to write an intro for your analysis paper

Literary Analysis Guide- worksheets reviewed in class. Introduction only- including engaging beginnings

Revise introductions based on information learned about analysis intro.
Must turn in revised introduction with teacher suggestions next class day.

Models viewed of Introductions and Thesis statements.

4/21-4/22
No Journal. Instead review study guide for test today

Class reviews workbook pg 177
students present questions about study guide items for class discussion

Test TFA- taken

4/10/08

4/7B-4/10B English II Honors

Monday/Tuesday-No Journal-Instead do a back map of Embedded Assessment 2, Unit 3 on PG 188-189. Do it individually. Remember, you should know how to do this by now.

Bring Things Fall Apart to class daily, as we aren't finished with it yet.

NWEA Testing 4/8-4/11
Copy Information from Board:
Due 4/14 A
4/15 B
PG 177-180 (workbook assignments)
pg 184-Add transitions using editing marks
pf 185- letter

R#45- 3 column notes on your chosen theme from TFA. Example is on pg 187.
Topic:
What characters/say/do/book quote deeper meaning/commentary PG#/CH

J#42
Dramatic Irony: When a character or speaker says something that has different meanings from what he/she thinks it means, though the implications of the speech or action maybe fully understood by the audience or other characters

How does the District Commissioner's final comments on Okonkwo represent dramatic irony? Look at TFA PG 208-209 to answer.

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B- Monday A-Thursday- If you missed either of these days this week, you must do the following on your own

-Class back mapped together Embedded Assessment 2
-Defined Theme as class
-Brainstormed all of the possible themes in Things Fall Apart
-Chose a Theme to write about for EA2
-Each student Brainstormed their chosen theme to discover a thesis statement. Example was provided on the board by Ms. Batten
-Each student wrote their thesis. Checked by Ms. Batten.

4/7/08

Yearbook 4/7-4/11

Finish Proof Corrections for Deadline 5. Due to editors by 4/11.

Nicole-edits Proofs 5- last segment (already edited Proofs 3- to be checked by Ms. Batten)
Louvennia-edits Proofs 5-1st segment (already edited Proofs 4- to be checked by Ms. Batten)

The REST OF STAFF

Project 1- DVD Music Project-Due 4/16 A and 4/17 B
*You must complete all parts of this assignment and turn them in for credit*
A)Brainstorm, research Internet for a minimum of 50 songs that have something to do with movement (physical or emotional). List the title and author of each song.

EX: A: House of Pain T: Jump Around

B)Listen to each song or view the lyrics (lyrics.com) and deem whether the song is appropriate to put on a high school yearbook DVD. If a song has an edited version, we can use that, however, the song must still be appropriate despite the edits. Circle all appropriate songs/artist.

C)Sort and TYPE the appropriate songs/artist into sub folders. Be very specific.
EX:
Faculty, Sports (Basketball, Cheer leading, Baseball, etc), Academics (English, Math, Science, etc), Seniors (spirit week, takeover day, etc), Student Life (pep rallies, Homecoming, Bonfire, Parade, etc)

Extra Credit +50
Burn final songs chosen in the order you sorted them on a CD.

-This is an individual project. You are not to work with anyone. If I see you working with someone, you will lose points

2) Clean out your YB Box. Put all items in appropriate envelopes in appropriate boxes.